Tuesday, August 30, 2005

Morning Blues



Rich aroma of coffee brewing early in the morning; a bunch of fresh blue flowers which he usually brought back from his morning walks; the crystal vase she had begged and pleaded for, in spite of it's atrocious overprice.....sunlight pouring in through the big bay window, and the sweet warmth of her blanket.

Sneha cuddled deeper in her bed, smiling imagining the scene across her closed eyelids.

"It's a dream, a beautiful dream, and I don't wish to wake up from it."

And then there was an irritating noise.....vaguely familiar, horribly persistent; oh!what is this? Annoyed, Sneha grappled her hands around, and found the ringing cell phone.

"Good morning, sweetheart!"

And she was jolted awake. His wife was back in town.

And it would be ages before she would dream again.

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ow!!Sad that.

heretic said...

Forbidden love, that. :)
Wonder if I'd meet Sneha again. :))

AmitKen said...

lol :)
nice one, that..

Prasad Narulkar said...

really sorry...but i dint quite get it...
*looks at u...confused*
:-( :-(

manuscrypts said...

hmm, almost nightmarish.... by the way 'rich'..spello :)

Fundoo said...

Honestly speaking I was at sea when I read this post for the first time! It was only when I forced my (literarily disoriented) brain to work a lil harder that I was able to make out the beauty of words woven here!

Very well written Deez. You've said a lot in fewer words!

Sangeeta said...

Uh-Oh :( scaryyyy....

Prasad Narulkar said...

hey....i still dint get it!!
:-(
*sob sob*

Deez said...

aberrant hang in there. its okay not to understand :)

Deez said...

jw well.....

Deez said...

heretic lol! i wonder too.

Deez said...

amitken thx

Deez said...

manuscrypts spell checked!!

fundoo shukriya!!

sangeeta really???

Anonymous said...

why does love have to have a negative tone to it usually?

Dreamcatcher said...

Pithy but the ending is superb.

AmitL said...

Hi,Deez...well,dreams are meant to be woken,na?:)Nice short story..